All Comments on 'Pool of the Naiads Pt. 01'

How is it that I am actually able to see what you are writing???

Well crafted elegy.

A secret garden, Indeed

Your imagination knows no bounds. Since I have been here in this house I have wondered what to do with this large and overgrown garden. I shall dig a pond ,inhabit it with small fish place my bench beside it then sit and dream of naiads, the only visitor I get at present is next doors cat. Chasing birds and leaving messages.

Max you old romantic, just read this story again . Lovely.

I think this is a lovely tale of love and I do enjoy reading it. So happy to re-read your tales Max you ask me at times for my offerings, well sorry to disappoint but they would be nowhere near as good as these.

Happy to bless you with five stars.

This is a wonderful story. The prose is somewhat detached, supporting the dreamy vision. Style meets substance!