All Comments on 'Pool Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Pol Party

I liked the story, would have liked it better if Dave and sister had continued after the others had left. Maybe a three way air tight would have been great. I did enjoy the story.

Keepem cumin

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Increditble Story

Very new approach, enjoyed the story, hope there's more to cum..

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
barebacked fucking at its best, in all innocence..

Wow..great teenaged fucking without thought of birth control and doing it barebacked.....GREAT!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
No

Didn't like the story at all. Chick was too slutty. Jimmy too fucking pushy, and then the dumb slut kept fucking the friend behind her brothers back. That just shits me to tears. Sorry. But for me: instant soft-on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good writing...wish there was more.

Sounds 'plausibile', without the wild histrionics! Probably happens more often, than not.But, that's part of lifes' experiences.!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
wrong tags

Oh my god who made the tags for this story? They should just shoot themselves.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Beet beet beet

It is beet red, not beat. Short for beetroot.

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