All Comments on 'Poolside Ch. 03, Pt. 2'

Very good, but sweeping eagerness of girl to looses cherry is pretty abnormal. I feel an unmarried virgin is usually shy ,afraid and rough to handle.

Helping mother and aunt are prized. I have seen it happening in real life. Even understanding mother-in-law providing breaks to a powerful man seducing her beautiful bride. I wish to see more such stories.

Leo It seems I jumped the gun in my last message , this episode is even better than the previous one, as usual you certainly know how to build up the tension. this one gave me quite a buzz. you already know where, thank you for a lovely story

Love Jem

"I'll rape you just you like Bud tried last night."

Against my better judgement, I finished your story after reading this dialogue. It was not redeemed.