by LeoDavis
The only mistake your protagonist made, was by NOT running like a scared rabbit on his first visit to 'Mommas' house, especially after catching the 'look' from her.---As for the 'rip - their - hearts - out - at - the - hotel' scene, well, I'm afraid Momma would have died that day, if she pulled that horseshit on me. But hey, that's just my take on things.
Talk about what wonderous webs we weave, that has nothing on this lot GOSH what a manipulative shower, the earlier part of the chapter got me going as usual wet knickers type of thing , but the arrival of the mother & aunt now that was a crusher, your stories are certainly a roller coaster ride. I can't praise your talent high
enough
Love Jem