All Comments on 'Poolside Fun'

by SDLRob

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Short and sweat. Clever ending. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

What a surprise in the end. And since you have already teased the threesome, would be lovely if you went through with it and wrote another chapter. With your writing skills, I am positive it would be mind blowing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I like it. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Rick, Kate and Alexis---why not Rick's mom?

The threesome is natural...

Can't get enough of it...

Wondering why Rick's mom isn't getting any...

She and Rick had opportunities whil Alexis was in school...

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