All Comments on 'Poolside Stranger'

Romantic , erotic and imaginative . A bit different

My wife swam competitively, among many other talents. I found her red hair, her sweet smile, and the large "flotation devices" on her chest to be seductive. Despite her impressive bedroom skills, she thought I deserved better. She wanted me to find a girlfriend. I said no -- if she wanted that, she'd have to select my lady for me.

My wife died. A year later, I met a stunning brunette. Twelve months of fucking, sucking, and titfucking followed. Some details similar to Serge and Evely. Did my wife send me a girlfriend? Maybe....

My first wife's name was Evelyn, and she left me a widower at 35, dead of metastatic colon cancer. She made the same promise, that she would send my forever bride. Though it was 15 years before she arrived, arrive she did. Almost 17 years later, we are happier than ever.

Keep up the good work and maybe give us a sequel.

The story was enjoyable at first, but it was a stretch as to why she was there and why she would do what she did. I was thinking a good solid 4*, but when the end came, it was great, wrapping it all up perfectly, and causing me to bump the score to 5.

Great job and thanks for writing and sharing.

This is a nice story that is well told. How much more can we ask for? THANKS

I enjoyed the story. Thank you.

rRC

Nicely written and a very go story.

A real tear jersey. Good story. Thank you.

well done

Sorry, but the family can’t take back gifts which are freely given! Evely rightly owned those gifts so she could take them. Now Serge could sue Evely’s ex’s estate for the beating he received which was on the security cameras.

Well done.

This, touched up a bit to reflect the season, should be in the next Halloween competition.

It looks like Sierra is going to be around for a lot longer. I am sure Serge will not complain.

A little spooky, but lovely too. Great story got up in it at the very beginning.

The third story of yours I've read, each one with a different reason for two people finding each other. Wonderful! (I may run out of words of appreciation if I read many more)

Another great story with a wicked twist at the end. Loved it!

A kinda surreal story.