by Fliccy_sub
What a lovely story, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Abby getting pregnant by her dad and having the baby would be so wonderful.
You developed this story very, very well. I would like to see you to continue the story and add more detail to the story line. Develop the potential antagonists, the brother and mother.
To hell with the spoiled selfish brother and shit mother. Move away without giving them the forwarding address. Otherwise a great story can't wait to read the next chapter.
I loved this story and hope that you can add one or two more chapters to what you have already written. Now that you have included Andrew near the end, and added the "baby" conversation you really can't just end it here.
So beautiful that a father and daughter can express their desires.
wow sounds like mom and bro need to be dropped off a very high building. great story besides the gutless mom and the spoiled brother.
Will the story continue? I would love to read about them having children together.
Such a lovely story! I wish you would write a sequel for it, maybe with the two of them starting their own little family.
Five stars from me!