All Comments on 'Popocatepetl's Son'

Neat story I liked it very much.

Cheers

SAGE

I loathe rape stories, I fail to understand how writing about one of mans greatest violations is interesting, nevertheless it is a well written story, I’m currently waiting for the last Trojan story to come, I wonder how that ends.

Nice, well written story. I enjoyed it very much.

Some will say it is incomplete but what more could a reader want. Well done. Thanks for your hard work.

Anonymous reader, I take exception to your comment. This is NOT a pro-rape story, far from it. Enzo's harsh punishment of the rapist is evidence of that. It is instead a story about devotion, rescue and redemption, vetted by two women on my beta team. QED.

Lovely story, thank you!

I love this story of healing. It is always wonderful to read a story which shows such tender care and love. Nice job.

I've been an anonymous reader of Literotica for at least 10 years but I've started to become a little tired of the unrealistic huge-boobed pure-sex stories but this one drew me into its realism and feelings. Magnifico! I'm going to look at the author's other stories now.

Good story!

5

Really enjoyed the story. One small detail is the rapist’s gun could only have been a flintlock pistol in 1809 time frame. The first percussion revolver was 1836 Colt Patterson. Also a flintlock would not be in a belt leather holster. Small error but wrong gun entirely.

Like the story a lot though.

NewOldGuy77

I believe I have written my comment wrong I am not accusing this story of pro-rape, it just caught me off guard, it’s such a horrible thing to do and the mention of it even seeing the word just makes me angry, I apologise if I’ve offended, I just loathe stories with even a hint of rape in them, it was still a good story, I just felt quite ill as it caught me off guard as my minds eye was still creating the scene before i could stop it

Also looking forward to the Trojan lasagna finish when the story comes.

I enjoyed this story very much. I’m a sucker for historical fiction, vivid, realistic settings, and well-developed, likable characters. You nailed it!

As always, thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

Spectacular.

Very evocative. Not an historical period or geographical region that I am familiar with yet I came away having been able to visualise this story perfectly. I can't comment on the authenticity of the dialog but it felt real. Most enjoyable and will be sampling more. Muy bien, and good call on the vocab footnote.