All Comments on 'Popping Her Cherry'

Very nice.

Yeah, there are a few typos - but it is obvious you made an effort.

But what was important was the story was hot and quite believable. The dialog was real. Well done!

Kind of wonder what mom will think, and how Ashley knows she's better.

Good story. But personally, would preferred him to fill her virgin pussy full of his cum, and see what developed from that in future stories.

great virgin story done perfect keep up thr great work

Wonderful!!! Would love a chapter 2 where they start up again the next night, the daughter gets nastier and Dad fucks her rough and she loves it!!! Please do this!!!!!

Great writing.

Moves at a perfect pace, wording is well chosen, you have talent!

I caught the Bears referance, are you a Chicagoan?

Excellent story, very well written!

Your timing and word choice is perfect.

You definitely have talent.

I caught the reference to the Bears,are you a Chicagoan?

WOW!!!!

FIVE STAR!!!!

So HOT. Well written with just the right amount of foreplay. Hoping more chapters follow as they have two whole days until mom returns and many more positions and rooms to explore. Hoping for an early morning fuck session, now that the virginity is a thing in the past, where they can see one another in the light of day.

Wish I could do my stepdaughters like that!

Very hot! More please. 5 Stars.

That was amazing, such a perfect tale of a passionate love between father and daughter.

Beautiful story. Keep writing. Wish all dads and daughters were like this

Loved it…

Thought it was really good!

You really have way with words and naughty imagery!

Ahhh alcohol !!!!!!!

Very well done and kept my 77 year old cock hard! Loved it sir!

More more more more

5⭐️ = YES

favorited = YES

super disappointed that her name is not Kiah = YES

Unhappy that, in both stories, I never got to know what happened, did mom find out (nope don't want her to join) do I have an imagination, Did I not put it in my folder of top 50ish Daddy/daughter stories because of this ( it really is so good, obviously 5 star, fav) . Did I put both stories in my private folder labeled "stories that need to be finished" = YES

Do I wish I could write as good as you so I could write my own stuff to check all my specific boxes = YES

Thanks for writing, sorry about all that ^

Very nice story. Mom was not supposed to find out fools. It was a great story

just for her and her Dad secret. Very well written and played out.

Mom needed to come home home and somehow get involved , , , ,