All Comments on 'Porcelain'

Not one of my favourites, but well written.

Yes I want more, the honeymoon for sure and I think a small breeding herd is a good idea.

Fun one. Good take on the IR and mature themes without becoming really fetishy about it. I think there's at least one more story in there. Maybe two. I'd put the honeymoon and pregnancy arcs in the same story, keep the, ah, community activities for another story.

Though, on the other hand, Porcelain's parents were the bad guys here for breaking up a marriage and neglecting their kid. They were swingers only interested in themselves. I think you do have to be careful that you don't end up with Porcelain and to a lesser degree Tayvon in the same situation. I mean, getting to play with all those young ladies sounds like fun on paper, but that can and will get in the way of intimacy and connection between Porcelain and Tayvon. Also, be careful you're not writing Tayvon as a superhuman sex god. He's still 45-46 at this point. 7 loads or more in a day? Dude's going to look like a dried out husk...

Found this to be a good story with done good laughs. Look forward to more

Loved the story, It is great to see a BM/WF story that is sexy and respectful. Looking forward to the next chapters of this couples life together. Thanks this is a favorite!!!! 10* s :-)

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I hope you've enjoyed Porcelain! It was a lot of fun to write and I'm really happy with how it turned out.

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I believe the American expression is 'You knocked it out of the park'. The British understatement is 'not bad at all'.

With trash like this it's no wonder there are racial tensions. 1*

Wonderful story. Hot romance and sex with Amelia and Tay. I was a little surprised that there wasn't any confrontation with Jane or anything, but then I realized: _she didn't matter_. This wasn't a story about her. She was just an event that happened, and the cheater wasn't important after that anymore. I think that was a good choice, to be honest. And I like the characters and would gladly read more of them. 5*

6 pages of racism, total lies, and bullshit about urban legends involving nonexistent BBC... sigh... when will this bullshit end?

Keep it going.

I loved it. Keep the sequels coming please. Don’t worry about the negative comments. They are simply jealous of the story.

I vote for all 3 options in that order as long as it doesn’t interfere with Quaranteam NW.

Love it, thank you, can't wait to read the nex5 installment.

Isn't it funny how all the negative comments seem to have been written by people who clearly haven't even read the story?

Loved it, it avoids a lot of genre stereotypes and stays loving and respectful

All 3 please

Excellent!! I vote all 3 follow ons as well, even if they are combined or whatever. I found myself getting excited when I realized he was going to marry her... not just erotica, but great story! I'll be waiting for more!