All Comments on 'Pornstar Neighbor'

Mor and more of this please and soon, cunt crazed sex maniac, Lanc’s, UK.

Started fine... then the moment she goes over to get her laptop fixed theres no build up its suddenly full blown sex

What happened? Story was going along great! The she goes to his apt late. And all of a sudden they are having Sex! If she was going to jump him, why did she bring the laptop? For a while I thought he was having a quick dream which might have worked, but this just didn't make sense! Don't get me wrong, sex in a story is great, but in this case the story itself suffered! A 5 story plummeted to a 2!

This story starts well and has a delicious ending, but it’s like somebody cut out the entire middle. There needs to be some lead in and build up from frozen laptop to full on rabbit action.

This is worse-quality writing than actual porn videos!