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ArawArawalmost 6 years ago
Part two?

Fun idea!

I am hoping for a part two.

highshine808highshine808over 4 years ago
fabulous ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

more of this please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
very good story

But imo you shouldn´t have included the parts with the pills and piss. Seemed kind of out of place for the relationship you created between them

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

can someone visualize this please😅

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenover 2 years ago

Well had me in the first half

inno0cent_bystanderinno0cent_bystander11 months ago

And another one and done

gkrishnagkrishna9 months ago

Really enjoyed this story except for the ending, but I hope you continue this in some form.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Everything was good until the pills and piss.

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