All Comments on 'Portal Elf'

Feel like I am the victim of a scam. Pretty good story that just stopped stopped with no ending or warning. Cheap trick. Consider going into used car sales.

This has the promise of a good, many chapter story. The premise is direct and simple and easily understood by all. The only drawback is the odd word out. You need a good proofreader for your story.

looking forward to the next installment. Can she teach him magic? can he get her preggers. Can he create a map accurate enough for her to find her way home if so does he go with< So many ways this story can expand. Thank you for sharing.. 5 stars for a great start.

NICE set-up. I'm looking forward to the "explanation." 5-star story.

Oh, and what Slofred said.

This was surprisingly good, and nice touch on the elves having little horns. When you're talking convergent evolution, not all elves are skinny humans with pointy ears.

I really like this story and agree that is screams that it needs a follow-up story, and probably more. Thanks for sharing. 5* And favorited. Slainté

Great start

I notice this doesn't have "Ch. 1" in the title. Surely, that doesn't mean this is a one-off.... It doesn't, right? You'll definitely continue the story at some point, right?

This is too good to end here!

Not a bad story at all. The narrative would benefit from more of a "show, don't tell" approach. But once it gets going, it's good.

All of the other responders got it right - this story needs / cries out for additional chapters. It has been three years now - surely you have a few ideas as to where this will / could be going.