All Comments on 'Portland House Ch. 01'

I take it that English isn't your 1st language because the sentence structure was awful, it read more like notes than sentences and just because you like water sports doesn't mean everyone has to read about it

You should have written that with a Crayola.

It should have been placed in "Fetish"

Also, a warning that the story contains scenes of "Water Sports" should have been put in an "Author's Notes" section at the beginning, so that those of us who don't want to read about such things can skip this story.

-Rei

Sounds like Paul will 'fit in' perfectly with the folks at Portland House. A well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.