All Comments on 'Portrait of a Lady'

Delicious, and very you. Loved it. Five shiny stars xxxx

Monica that was utterly exquisite. This takes eroticism to a whole new level. It is a truly superb story and I salute you. I would love there to be a Part 2 but I will leave that decision to you.

High quality writing which is what we've come to expect from you, Monica. However, the underlying theme is much darker than your usual fare. I tend to agree with Alice Gee---the story could be seen as complete as it stands but there is scope for a further part (or parts).

That's the kind of writing makes me wish I could experience this from a woman's point of view. Very sensual and sexy.

A lovely and wonderfully written story. I do hope that there's more of this. Thank you!

Absolutely divine! A sequel would be utterly desirable and a precious gift for all your readers.

Much as I enjoy the story as is, I rather think all the talk about the whip calls for a part two. Ok and I’d just really enjoy that with these characters.

A wonderful story. What class and elegance! What polished writing! Very fine indeed.

Nice! Will there be more?

Someone please tell me why I am incapable of envisioning Harriet as anyone but Gillian Anderson 🥵

It was a very good read, not something I should of done just before bed. Having said that the dreams were rather pleasant. trying to make up my mind, I know you aren't Harriet but are you a painter?

I loved it, it reminded me of so many different things, discussions, encounters. You do write well Mon, almost as well as many other things you seem to do. There is scope for a follow up, it would be interesting to see what happens when Grace appears on the scene.

Fabulous! Wonderfully erotic writing.

Wonderful, as a stand alone or as the beginning of a lovely series. The words emenate warmth.

Incredible story. As someone with no experience with D/S relatioships, this is how i imagine it for me. Looking forward to reading more.

Loving the start