Portrait Of a Wife

This is not “rough sex.” This is rape and intimidation. The husband is despicable. He should be protecting his wife from this vile artist - not encouraging her repeated rape. As for the story, it’s written from a sick, twisted, demented mind. A mind which may or may not benefit from psychiatric intervention. I fear it is too late for this author. Perhaps it’s time for a straight jacket and a padded cell. Remove him/her from society as a clear and present danger to him/herself and others.

Oh for a snipers rifle to scare the life out of that arrogant artist!/rspiist

Sexual assault cannot be romanticized, sanitized, or philosophized. MC and Donner were a pair of sick bastards. Awful story, brilliantly written--the very definition of waste.

There seems to be a big narrative hole between "a wall between us" and "didn't know if we could hold on" and the "happy love" of the next/last 3 paragraphs.

This one brings out the paradox in Literoctica story Rating.

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Are you rating this story for originality, quality in writing (grammar/spelling/typos), structure, and story flow?

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Or are rating this story on the subject, conclusions, emotional, revenge, and moral/justice points of the story?

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This is where Literotica FAILS in their rating system (and in rating editors).

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The writing of this story (originality, grammar, structure) is clearly a 5* but the subject is offensive to many, rating ~2.8*.

[Except for the L masturbaters, finding a ~4.7*.]

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I actually found this story predictable but titillating and the husband is a wimp-cuck making his wife a submissive-situational-slut. From a husband-wife sexuality, I see this marriage imploding just after the kids leave the nest. Eventually she will feel betrayed by her husband (on the ledge) for not stopping her rapes but enjoying her submission.

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3.7***, Hooyah

Great story, sexy and exciting, I love it...

Well crafted. Good work.

Reading thru the comments I have to wonder why people bother to read erotic stories if all they intend is to trash the author? What purpose is served by criticizing someone for their imagination/fantasies? I guess narrow-minded intolerance trumps intellect in literotica. As far as observing how a husband and wife would react to a provocation like this- in my experience different people will respond differently so claiming a generic rule will be true for some, perhaps a majority, but it will be untrue for many others (and that is the point of fiction- it's not necessarily "real life").

For me, this story excited my imagination! The notion that you could flow gently downhill until you cross a line and then discover both the eroticism of being pushed beyond an intended limit and the shame of liking the feeling gave the tale unique piquancy. My partner and I enjoy a loving intimacy that might be challenged by this scenario- but given our fantasy life, our relationship would also be strengthened if we actually engaged in some sort of play. Note- it is not for me (or YOU, gentle reader) to determine what is right/wrong/immoral/christian or permitted to another consenting adult. Remember, this is FICTION! :-)

Well done Cindysbob! Keep up the good work.

Love,

Chastity xo

1 star for one sick puppy.

The usual misogynistic "all good women are whores and sluts once they meet the right caveman" drivel.

As for the hub: a weak wannabe cuck if ever there was one.

At the end there was he really implying that she'd gone out and got herself ambushed by some mean stranger and he was cool about it? Sick!

Bahahahhhahahaha.

I once spanked my wife's pussy like they do in a porno.

Only ever did it once......