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Click hereLaying there in the dark that night, I'd let my eyes take in the still lovely lines of her body, see her eyes find mine.
"God, I love you," she'd murmur, her hand stroking though my hair.
I love you too, I thought. I love you too.
THE END
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- COMMENTS
Anonymous29 days agoThis is not “rough sex.” This is rape and intimidation. The husband is despicable. He should be protecting his wife from this vile artist - not encouraging her repeated rape. As for the story, it’s written from a sick, twisted, demented mind. A mind which may or may not benefit from psychiatric intervention. I fear it is too late for this author. Perhaps it’s time for a straight jacket and a padded cell. Remove him/her from society as a clear and present danger to him/herself and others.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoOh for a snipers rifle to scare the life out of that arrogant artist!/rspiist
Anonymous9 months agoSexual assault cannot be romanticized, sanitized, or philosophized. MC and Donner were a pair of sick bastards. Awful story, brilliantly written--the very definition of waste.
OlFrog14xabout 1 year agoThere seems to be a big narrative hole between "a wall between us" and "didn't know if we could hold on" and the "happy love" of the next/last 3 paragraphs.
KRD19254over 1 year agoThis one brings out the paradox in Literoctica story Rating.
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Are you rating this story for originality, quality in writing (grammar/spelling/typos), structure, and story flow?
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Or are rating this story on the subject, conclusions, emotional, revenge, and moral/justice points of the story?
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This is where Literotica FAILS in their rating system (and in rating editors).
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The writing of this story (originality, grammar, structure) is clearly a 5* but the subject is offensive to many, rating ~2.8*.
[Except for the L masturbaters, finding a ~4.7*.]
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I actually found this story predictable but titillating and the husband is a wimp-cuck making his wife a submissive-situational-slut. From a husband-wife sexuality, I see this marriage imploding just after the kids leave the nest. Eventually she will feel betrayed by her husband (on the ledge) for not stopping her rapes but enjoying her submission.
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3.7***, Hooyah
