by blondsubles
this was written good, a little short but still good, I don't think she should be taking advantage of this girl who is really shy, but this is just my opinion
I like you character development giving a slow but seductive build to the final scene. The question that came to me on completing your story was that this is just a start to a bigger story. I hope I am right because you cannot leave us hanging free. Five Stars.
A treasure and the treasure chest is never to be found on the easy spot, mostly hidden and guarded ...... So the knight in the perfect amor will be the one to discover this treasure .... May nudity will be an amor for fighting the walls a sword would not ise for success ....... Im impressed one page without wild sex but still enchanting
Where's the rest? I thought you were just doing a setup for the rest of the story.