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Darn! I wanted Gen and Callie to swap phone numbers and hook up that night. That would teach Erica not to screw around when turning Gen on. Lots of fun anyway.

Wonderful short story....

this was a story! Wow! I love the dialogue, the descriptions and the wonderfully different use of adjectives to describe their encounter. Just made me wish it were me! I am going to have to take up catering jobs.

Would love to see Gen and Callie get together again. Perhaps Erica could make an appearance and take charge.

Good short story. Lots of potential to expand if you wanted but not necessary.

More to come? Please …

Loved this story. Wonderful, it worked for me. I do love weddings as the scene for lesbian fiction!

I had a bridesmaid once. It was at a gay wedding, of all things, and she was the sister of one of the grooms. The man she was with was not paying her enough attention, so I did. I ate my wedding breakfast in a storeroom as the photos were being set up, and I know she wasn't wearing her panties through the rest of the event - because they were in my pocket!

Lexi

Incredibly well-written, stylish and controlled

... And hot, hot, hot!

I just loved it.