by sirhugs
Great tour de force!! Your story was well written and very exciting, mucho gracias!!
This was a good, hot story, although it could have used more proof reading. I noticed something else, which I will PM or email you about.
spend, and as much fun as my one of my one-time wife's orgasmic laughter.
Your story caught my attention right away and kept it until the end. Great job!
I've been going back through some of Your stories that I don't think I've read before...and I just had to leave a comment on this one. I love it. :)
I've always been a fan of the detail You bring to sex! ;) I do hope to see more submissions from You in 2007 and will continue to read older ones.
~Eve
You write like you're watching porn on a widescreen... and using a remote button to freezing each frame, so the details can be examined. Very fine work, Sir.
Now that is the best ass eating story I've read on here. The descriptions and details were perfect. The aroma of her asshole, the fucking and eating of her soiled tailhole made me want to spill my seed on my own. More story's with details like that are needed. Great work. You get a 5 star rating. Thanks.