All Comments on 'Possession Ch. 01'

This is a great start on a tale of submisssion and exploytation, want to see where it goes.

just a little more of break when switching between his part and her part would make it easier to follow and flow much better. Other than that I agree whole heartily with the previous comment

Your style and your content speak well of your abilities. One reads it and wishes that it were autobiographical.