by Lost-Boy
I have thoroughly enjoyed these stories-- Great story and great sex! what more could we ask? Just don't leave us hanging so long the next time
Can't let another 13 months go by without another submission!! Great job
Awesome story, even more awesome sex. Had to go back and re-read the previous installments to get back up to speed but am really glad you finally decided to continue this story. Noticed one little inconsistency though; Aaron is only meant to have a bike (which is one of the primary reasons for his grudge fuck with Alexis) but out of the blue he has a car. Could you please clear that up?! Little inconsistencies like that are what detract from a good tale. Still an awesome story though, thank you for sharing it with us.
That is Alexis' car, she gave it to him. I guess I didn't make that clear, sorry.
So glad to see you return. Had to start all over to refresh my memory and so glad I did. This is an excellent story. I cant wait to see how this is going to progress. ty/bill
As everyone else has said please don't make us wait so long to get the next chapter,your doing a great job I was wet the whole time as I got into the first chapter then the next,next and next.............. so please keep making me climax as much as they do in the story. I also love it in my ass and climax hard with it deep in me so please tell us more. I think his sister will love it too when he takes her cherry ass.
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I am still confused on whether or not she has feelings for him or not
i like the story. Please don't make us wait a year for the next chapter. Also, the Demon needs a name.
I plan on covering her more in the next piece and go into her back story more.
I'm grateful that you are continuing the series, hope to see more soon.
Once again Thank you.
state please do not take too long to continue. I do enjoy this story, so please don't get too involved with the sex and forget the story line.
I loved this story the character development was wonderful and it flowed marvelously and you have enough content to make at lease two more stories with the other demons coins and the family secrets the fact that he is an atlantian and all plus some of which I don't remember plus this story has definitely gotten a five stars from me so I ask will you please continue this story it is wonderful
great storyline. easy read I hope there are more chapters to come.
More chapters, please. We need more information on the family lineage and of some family secrets. Also more , um, guiding light sequences apart from the demon. Come on, get writing.
One little word that drives me crazy, drug instead of dragged. Other than this an excellent story and am eagerly awaiting Ch 4
This is still one of my favorite series of stories! I really enjoy the characters and story line. The trouble is that you have left us with a cliffhanger and we are all dying to hear all about the family history-- and the rest of the fun with the demon.
I have really enjoyed this story but unfortunately it is as with many good ones, and not finished.
you need to keep this one going it was just getting good and you stopped, what a cliff hanger so what happens next.
I DEFINITELY want to read the rest of this story. It could go SO many directions
Love this story. I would love a book like this.
I found myself skipping some of the sex just to
Get on with the plot. Well done. I hope you keep
Going.
This would be one hell of a book and a well above average adult film.
The writing, story and character development are all exceptional.
Would very much enjoy more of the series.
Please do not stop! Love the story, I never give 5's, but for you i'll make an exception.