by hardwoodstudios
The load that I just blew. Fucking hell. You had me edging the whole story. Great work
That was awesome! I hope their story doesn't end there. I really love
you're stories!
Amazing!! You're a great writer, your characters are so real, the story is capturing, and the sex is the hottest! These two might be one of my favorite couples yet. Z is just wow. I know it's a standalone, but I would love more of these two.
I'd like to believe the "standalone" part of your A/N was a prank, given your posting date. I would like ten more parts at least of these two, please and thank you.
I read all the stories you've posted here, including the ones you've deleted and the improvement is insane. This had such a great balance of characterization and erotic writing, you want to knoe more about the characters and where they go.
Man, you can't just write such a great one part-er and leave so many mysteries unresolved! It's amazing but there's so many details that suggest there could be a bigger picture to the story
Well written - in that aspect it's a five star deal. I think it needed to continue a little longer? My opinion only.
Amazing just amazing. Please continue the story? And if you ever publish anything on Amazon or Smashwords-- bro take my credit card now . Fr I didn't even like it that much
Amazing just amazing. Please continue the story? Also if you ever publish anything on Amazon or Smashwords -- bro, take my credit card now. For real I don't even like it that much
The level of improvememnt in your work from the first chapter of Once a Nerd to this...are you the same author? Don't get me wrong, OAN is a great story. You had me hooked from go and I am very excited for more of Dean & Sam. This was mindblowing. I see you have a patreon but I really hope you are considering the leap to full length novels. You would instantly be a one-click buy.
Whut? You hittin’ two balls outta the park simultaneously now? How you get so damn good? I have been enjoying OaN tremendously, and now this awesomeness? I kiss you on both cheeks, like a Frenchman! [And I too would have no objection to the big Russian and his little-not-so-little Kit, making another appearance. Or just the big Russian by himself – he must have a backstory…]
Amazing story! Truly a natural.
Please accept my humble thank you!
11/10 You're very good at painting a vivid picture for the reader.
This has blown my mind. Who are you really? This is easily one of the best things published on Lit, on any online erotica site that I’ve read. Echoing others, please get published, and thank you.
God damn that was hot. I echo everyone else on not leaving this as a one off, I'm super invested in Kit now and I want him to be able to come to terms with getting fucked and liking it.
This was so captivating and I just couldn't stop reading! This is perfect as it is and yet I still want more!