All Comments on 'Post Game Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
New idea and well done!

New idea with nice twist, well written, and a fun read. I like how you get right into it, with no silly descriptions of how cute he or she is, etc. I don't think I'd ever try that, as guys' locker rooms stink like hell due to discarded gear and guys who don't take showers after games (what are they thinking?). But this would make me think about it.

SharedSigneSharedSignealmost 8 years ago
loved it

fFom a woman who loves to be shared, 5 stars for a hot story!

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