by johnnylikesit
Well written with good descriptive details , but above everything else it was believable for the time period it relates too , thankyou for the time you took to write for us the readers .
Very nice story! You should know that “it’s” is used only when it is taking the place of “it is”. The possessive form of “it” is “its” (no apostrophe).
Well done every young man should have a loving mature woman show him the way. Five stars.