by YourGirlGracie
I think I would have kept this one lol .Great story I loved it .
Stephen J
Epically bad story. So totally implausible and unbelievable. Still laughing at how ridiculous this was.
This is one of those rare original concepts that seize your interest. Who are these people, and why can't the 'delivery packages' speak or respond when spoken to? Great writing.
What an absolute masterpiece of character motivation. The lust was exaggerated but not overly absurd. The personal emtlotional motivations of the characters felt like they were written by someone who has real experience navigating a woman like the protagonists wife. I'm now motivated to explore the theme of intensely manipulative and conniving bitches using people 100% for their own perversions. I hope you'll write more.