All Comments on 'Power Plays Ch. 01'

I have a new favorite author.

I do hope you'll resolve Claire's "dilemma". Excellent read.

This is a seriously good piece of writing. Particularly noteworthy is the sexual undercurrent, which seems to be dancing counterpoint to the actual storyline...the slow build-up is so well-written and so powerful. Everything about the writing is so accomplished and so natural. Definitely 5 stars!

I'd like to say...this is good. Seriously good. Don't get cocky, it will be hard for subsequent chapters to match the first. But, dang! Sure hope they do.

Thanks and keep writing.

Excellent. I can't wait for the storm to hit. I love a good downpour of intelligent sex and emotion.

Very well written and great characterisation. Some very hot scenes too. Really like this, a 'stand out'.

I am straight and have been my whole life. Now I'm wondering what I've been denying myself. Climaxed repeatedly while reading and fingering myself. I want that now !

This is the first story on literotica I actually bookmarked for a sequel. The parts with julie and her boyfriend didn't quite turn me on, but Madison's scenes are so well written and erotic and just....oh god please write more! 5 stars!

WOW. that was good 5 stars

i very patiently w8 4 chapter 3!!! Very professional

I've read hundreds of lesbian stories, on Literotica and elsewhere, and over many years. This is one of the best. I had my doubts after reading the mountain story; just didn't click with me. This one clicks very loudly. Perhaps it's the d/s element, a theme I particularly enjoy in a lesbian setting. Very well written with excellent pacing.

That's the shit

Oh my god, I am laughing so hard! That was awesome! Go get 'er, Claire! ;)

Oh I can't wait to read the continuation. I dream of replaying the bathroom scene in my head, to a hot woman standing in front of me. God, I'm wet

Oh my God this was so erotically good. I'm so glad there are two more chapters to read!

This is going to be a good one. I like this first chapter.

So what, want to keep the job shut up, want to leave scream ...... Money is power ...... Nothing new but more visual nowadays then ever ...... Nice beginning with some interesting possibilities for the future