All Comments on 'Powerful (Immortal Love Series) 4'

So glad you came back and am thankful for this chapter. Gonna explode waiting for the next.

you have to continue, love this sooooooo much.

Such a great story please continue.

Is there more ? If there is can you mention where we can read it please...

More!!!

I was enjoying the story when it came to an abrupt end.

I was following along with the story... then it all of a sudden just ends!!!??!!

What happened with Ashleigh? Do her and her brother ever get to be together? There's so many unanswered questions. I would really love to see you complete the story!!!

A FOREVER FAN!!!

Ummm yeah....then what?

Lol

Masterful work. Fucken FANTASTIC!

Keep this story rockin, for fuxake, PLEASE....

I NEED 2 know that Ashleigh & David make it.

They deserve 2 b 2getha.

More, please, more. Did I say more? Lots more!

I want more Immortal Love from these two beautiful people.

And Danielle?? Release her passion, she's gorgeous too.

More antagonising from Mum, she's the perfect bitch! (maybe a long lost relo to get up her nose??, just a suggestion😉)

Absolutely amazing reading.

Peace Out Mate✌️

If you wish to leave the story, atleast give us a closure chapter.

Otherwise keep going, it's a nice story, and don't worry about the ratings or comments. This is a very nice story and a lot of us appreciate it.

must have more

if this chapter was supposed to be the end. youre gonna make it 1 and less than a quarter page long?

Good story but it was never finished

I can't believe this is all there is... This was too good to be left unfinished. :(