All Comments on 'Powers of Persuasion Ch. 02: Willing'

Oh yeah, you are definitely an erotica writer. I'm glad you listened to the pleas of myself and others from your last chapter, and continued this. You can have a long run with this. Another great job.

I saw few errors of any kind in this chapter, and all I've got to say is... Keep it going!

i hope you know your a better witter then your name says 5 stars this was great all the way thrrough the story and i really like how you take time building the characters ive read so many stories where you get confused on who is who and they jump from scene to scene or name to name. But here wow great story great, red line and we really get to know who Jamie is who Mary is and who Eva is great work.

Hot story! I love this voluntary cobscious control kink! Please continue.