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by FlynnTalwar
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DaveK77 months agoFive Stars!
Since you've disabled voting -- you should have more trust in yourself, as this is GREAT!
FlynnTalwar7 months agoAuthorDaveK7, I went back and checked, and I'm pretty sure I didn't disable voting. If so, it'd be a real mystery as to how there's a score beside this story on the main romance page. Check your browser, maybe clear your data, or use another browser? Sometimes weird Internet-y stuff that like that happens to me too.
Demosthenes384bc7 months agoWell done! Great balance in storytelling and a solid plot with great progression. I would have liked a little more involvement of her mom in the back half as she seemed to disappear in the story after a strong presence up front. 4.7*
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FlynnTalwar@FlynnTalwarThanks for dropping by. I'm a long-time writer but only recently joined Literotica when I was able to get back into my craft for love and no longer for money. My stories will almost always feature interracial couples, although that's not by far the main theme of any of them....
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