by mypenname3000
Your story is really hot, but there's something else coming through... It's like he hates his daughter. There is absolutely no love, no tenderness. He ONLY refers to her as,'whore,' 'slut,' and the like. And the way she thinks of herself seems like she has no regard for herself either. The story seems filled with a certain amount of self loathing, so much that it detracts from the eroticism. This is not a critique of your work... it's really well written and well put together. This is an observation of the picture painted by your words.
But Daddy has got to get into that tight, hot,18 year old virgin ass and open it up.
You can't have a good whore that doesn't take it up the ass.
That way when she is 69'ing with Donna, Daddy can be using that tight little butt hole and helping the whore see stars!
Love it! Her first female partner will be Donna, and Donna will let it intentionally slip she's having a lesbian affair with the mother, then the 3 women will get together. Eventually Preacher and the Deacon will invite other men from the congregation to use the women, maybe even having the "whores" used in the public part of the church.
Nothing like going to an adult theatre with preacher dad, mine was not a preacher. My hubby Mitch liked to take me too, either a theatre or ABS, it was always fun. Getting paid is great too.