All Comments on 'Pregnancy Blues'

by erotowriter

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Woooo..

a true loving wife. stories like yours are pretty rare in this site, let alone this category.

short, but i did find it erotic. well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Very Nice!

Great little story, Thank You!

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969almost 16 years ago
Now here....

We have a rare thing a loving wife story with no cheating. I am very sorry I half expected the wif eto be pregnant by somebody else I am really happy to be proved wrong!.

BigFtHunterBigFtHunteralmost 16 years ago
This is really refreshing.

Great job. Two people really in love and the wife is actually having her and her husbands baby. I like the no wimp husband no cuckold approach here. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Liked it!

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Excellent

A very well thought out and written story. KUDOS!!!

sexysmilesexysmilealmost 16 years ago
Bravo!

Very, very well done. You did a marvelous job of conveying the emotion between them and how it intensifies their erotic moments. Thank you!

DjmcljrDjmcljralmost 16 years ago
Your intention?

If a heart felt smile was your intent, then you accomplished your goal. Well thought out and written. It reminded me of the look on my wife's face when she opened her eyes to look at the test result of our first child twenty four years ago. Thanks for reminding me of that memory. Don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Impressive

Great subject and well done.<P>

Life like in a very touching word picture.<P>

Thanks Authoress.<P>

With Regard

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
One Sperm "donor"

Hey, Babe.....you do know that your pussy will take more than one cock's sperm, don't you? If that one cock won't make you pregnant, maybe you need to experience another one and another one and another one until you get knocked up? Have some fun outside of your marriage, and then you can always come back to your unsuspecting hubby who will raise the rug-crawler with you and give it his name.

APeacefulPlaceTxAPeacefulPlaceTxalmost 16 years ago
What is with some posters?

I don't think they read the stories before the slams begin. Sperm Donor?

Well done, I hope you'll try a longer story, challenge yourself with a plot and a message, you'll grow as a writer.

maninconnmaninconnalmost 16 years ago
Nice

You did a great job of building to a tragic end, and then wound up with a happily ever after. Thanks for a touching read!

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Very nicely done

Excellent story, beautifully told.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Rubbish

Put it in the dust bin

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Good

Surprising and good story.

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