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justwarped2018justwarped2018almost 4 years ago

want to read more thanks

NicealloverNicealloverover 1 year ago

I’d love to encourage the author more. This is an exciting excellent idea and there is a clear writing style. An excellent first attempt. Maybe could have used a teaser like starting in the middle of her seducing a man and then flash back to explain how it all started.

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I write short, erotic stories that heavily feature a loss of control. These are usually told with a focus on the victim, and often the events of the story will be the unintended consequences of the victim's own actions. I try to post a story or new chapter at least once every ...

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