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Another spill cheque ( spell check) , google gamer( grammer) cluster fuck. Wrong words , wrong tenses of words.

You need to learn to write. Impossible to follow who is talking. Or are they just thinking. Words mean something. Try reading the story before posting it.

Seems incomplete. Daughter needs to get fucked, badly.

Other grammatical problems.

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Questions (such as `Can you 69 me, and press your panties real close to my face.') require question marks.

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If a paragraph doesn’t begin with a quotation mark, that indicates it’s narrative. When one character is speaking and is not uninterrupted by narrative or another character talking, every paragraph starts with a mark, but only the last one has a closing mark.

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when one paragraph ends with a quotation mark and the very next one starts with a mark, that indicates the character speaking has changed.

Dad should have fucked his daughter ,at least he cant get her pregant 11/03/23