All Comments on 'Prenup'

To the curb with gallon of gas and a match. 2

Trash, you said theres no cuckold but even a retard knows he's a cuck

A kiss with her lover's cum in her mouth. Pass on that.

This is just stupid

26thNC Approved - 5 stars

6 Comments in less than 5 hours of publication. I can't probably ask for anything more.

My special thanks are due to 26thNC.

To me it is not a cuckold story.

It is a 'Loving Wife' story with a sublime betrayal, out of curiosity and infatuation.

Betrayal more from a friend's point of view rather than wife's side.

I respect everyone's view point.

Have a great day.

Keep reading Literotica...

Please don't write an entire paragraph in all caps ever again. I have no difficulty with a main character who is a cuckold, but a cuckold denying he is a cuckold is quite sad and pathetic. I don't think that is the tone you were going for, but tha's where the story ended up.

Really? Why the epilogue? Totally changed the tone of the story.

Every time something new on Literotica it is about cuckold stories. I getting tired scanning the first few sentences then jumped to the near end of the story only to get confirmation that it is a cuck story. Boy I hate cuck stories. I thought this was Loving Wives niche as there are far more niches for deviant behaviors like Fetish, Erotic Coupling and so forth and I see the only category for normal heterosexual people get to read about good marriages and loving wives (also BTB, yeah RAAC sometimes, divorcing cheating spouses) is the LW. But nooo, the cucks are invading this niche too. There is nothing sexy about strange cock-hungry wives and wimpy cucks. Only sexual deviants love this.

Meh. He was a wimp. He was afraid of Steve. He should have stopped them and threw them both out the first night. He had to let things go so far that he could justify bringing in the police instead of standing up for himself.

What I don't understand is why he didn't enact the pre-nup after the first blowjob? I'm sure that there pre-nup would have specified that as crossing the line. Why didn't he kick his ex-friend out after the blowjob? Why would he even allow his friend to stay in his house if he had any concern about the friend's behavior? You also failed to mention Stacy being tested for STDs, any counseling she would have (individual & couples), also about her going to the hospital or police station to give testimony for the rape, and have a rape kit used on her to collect evidence (what about the possibility of Steve getting her pregnant), and lastly you skipped over what would happen to Steve. You're characterization of her being a lawyer seems a little off, she might be loving and sexy but she would also have a tough and stressful job, and may be home later than him sometimes. And lastly, I'm sure he could find out who to give cigarettes to, to insure Steve's time in prison was remembered.

In essence you concentrated too much on the idea of the Pre-nup and ignored the other areas.

Your opinion about cuckold and mine is different. This is simply a "give an inch, take a mile" story.

Learn English or at least find an editor who's acquainted with it. Also; EASE UP ON THE CAPS LOCK...JESUS!

Good!

Thanks for the warning Cucknut that this story sucks. Another 1* for Cucknut approved

Thin line

LOL.

He is a sad cuck who will put up with anything.

She knows it.

He knows it.

I couldn't even get started good on this story because the English is so poor. The dialog and lack of any coherence makes it a terribly poor excuse for writing.

Does this earn the phrase "just a stupid story".................yeah, an empty, typical cuck story.

I get that English is not everyone’s first or even second language but to suffer through the bad English for a pathetic reconciliation when there was iron clad prenup is a total waste of the reader’s time and patience.

As always reconciliation get 1 star. Never get back together with a cheater, male or female it doesn’t matter. When one person in a relationship cheats it show a total lack of respect for the other person. The answer is you are always better off without the cheater.

In less than 19 hours of publication 9000 plus readership I sincerely thank you all. All your comments were well noted and taken care of. I wanted to pen down a different story with some twists and turns.

Cases, legalities and divorces are not the ultimate things in today's materialistic world. In this short story of less than 8000 words I intended to portray a normal middle class family. Instead of spontaneous outburst, introspecting things are of crucial importance. Getting separated is easy. But getting patch up is tough. What guarantee the next one gets won't be worse than the first?

If we can match and mold things that would be much better than let things go out of hand. Well, perceptions do differ from person to person. I appreciate all your view points, Thanks. .

You English not goodly

I thought about this story for quite a while and the characterization of the wife doesn't match her actions. You state both of them are LAW GRADUATES (meaning she either is a lawyer or studying to pass the bar exam - at least in the USA). That prenup implies both of them have extremely strong opinions and morals concerning cheating. Chances are neither of them goes by the Bill Clinton definition that oral sex is NOT sex. That prenup almost certainly spells out exactly what conditions qualify as cheating, and you can bet oral sex ( as well as anal and vaginal) would definitely qualify. It may go even further - i.e. the 12 year old rule - don't do anything with anyone that you wouldn't do with a 12 year old child of either sex in public. Someone of this strong a character and morals, especially considering her intelligence and education would NOT give anyone except her husband sexual favors - especially in her own home with her husband and children present - UNLESS she was high under the influence of drugs and/or alcohol. Speaking as one of those people, this type of action is unthinkable except if your drugged, and you would not allow yourself to get high except in an extremely safe situation where you trusted your partner (and everyone around you). Did she get hit by "the martian slut ray" as that is the only thing that would make sense for her behavior. As to the husband's actions - 1) except for the minority/fringe element - no one wants to see their partner performing sex with someone else; 2) when she was performing that first blowjob - that should have been the time to take the camera shots - kick Steve out of the house and end the friendship, and knock her back to reality by enacting the prenup. Giving permission to give more blowjobs makes no sense. Letting that a-hole stay in their house 5 minutes after the first blowjob would have been too much. Also - if she was being raped - why didn't she scream? Her husband and kids were home - she would have woken someone up. Basically what I'm saying is although you may have had a decent idea - a prenup that heavily penalizes a cheater - the rest of the story doesn't fit it. Take a look at kcfirst's faithful? and the follow-ups. At least one of those had a similar prenup, but the story supported it - your didn't.

Dear author!! Just because 9000 people looked at this crap does mean it was good. Look at the score. Well below 3. That alone should tell you it's not a good story. You also left cuckold out of your tags which would have stopped many readers.

Sweet’s still trying to get the knack of writing for LW, and he is a few years away from his goal. Your essay was better than his story, and I hope he reads it and apply it.

I'm unsure where your focus is. The act of cuckolding is simple. A man takes your wife with your knowledge - which he did. Friend or not he cuckolded you. The end terms of predefined agreements notwithstanding. The act is the act and you can't redefine things to suit your disgusting story. (after all, how is admitted betrayal not disgusting?)

The cap to all this is the willingness to reconcile without some form of penance. Certainly there was losing everything for "6 months". A nice little vacation from child rearing, if you ask me. Likely the same poor education/idea that got her the incentive to cheat in the first place. 6months was not long enough or strict enough, even if you thought she had changed.

Finally, GET AN EDITOR!!!!!

There are some minor salvageable points that should have been made superior, rather than placing them in caps like some sophomoric weasel.

Try again

Smokepole

Less than two days...

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Probably the most poorly written story I have ever tried to read. English probably isn't your first language;therefore, you should have had enough respect for your perspective readers to have someone fix your murder of English.

detroitdave

Badly thought out with cardboard characters spouting inane dialogue and doing things that are completely idiotic even for fictional characters. There was nothing erotic, sexy or entertaining about it. I understand the poor score it's getting.

1 star

Dear Anonymous Dated 28th Feb 2021,

UK English is different than USA English.

Asian English is different than African or Australian.

So which English you mean to say is bad?

Unless you are Jack of all trades and know all the spoken and written English of six continents.

Indians spoken English is the highest in the world.

More than putting all European or American continents together.

So, please don't under-estimate any country or continent's spoken or written English until you understand its culture and value systems.

Comment for the sake of comment lessens the value of the comment.

I see plenty of negative comments for stories otherwise are 'TAGGED' under 'HOT' with 4.7 or 4.8 rating. That's pathetic and unprofessional to the core.

Please refrain from making such comments for any write-up for any author under the 'SAFE TAG' of 'ANONYMOUS'.

It does not lead anyone any where, excepting some mental gratification in a negative way.

Have a great day Enjoy reading Literotica.

Another Cuckold

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How could any REAL MAN get pleasure from being a CUCK!!??

DISGUSTING!!!

Cuck story nothing

jtwheels

Nothings, if you spent as much effort writing your stories as you did defending them, maybe they wouldn't be so laughable.

An idle mind is a devil's workshop!

Think positive, good thins will prevail.

Think negative, bad things will fill the mind.

Whether 1st, 26th or 99th; whether LA, MB or NC negative mind can never produce positive results.

A PERSON WHO WRITES THREE COMMENTS FOR A STORY WITHIN 18 HOURS MAKES A LAUGHING STOCK FOR HIMSELF!!!

No further proof is required to prove his mental block.

Ok. I can barely handle reading this. Whomever is writing it, seems to be using some sort of English translator, and it isn’t doing the job. I only skimmed a few paragraphs, but take it the wife heard the friend had a big cock, and she wanted to try it. Husband got off on it. And although I didn’t read the whole thing, it seemed like the boyfriend got her pregnant, and they were both good with that? In any fantasy, there needs to be a degree of believability for it to work. The author does not develop the characters enough. There is no inner conflict from them, on what they are doing. Story not only lacks emotion, it is simply not believable, in this context. One star.

Been reading up on all of your stories really enjoying them so far. Keep up the amazing writing.

-26thNC Approved

My beautiful and faithful wife of 6 years with two bonny babies had just sucked another man's cock, in my house. And I caught her in the act. That was probably the hottest and sexiest thing I've ever seen or encountered!

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One star for the cuck story with no cuck tag

stop lying to your audience

When writing a story about a wimpy little cuckold, you should label it as such so people who don't like little wimp stories don't get fooled.

At least I now know to put this author on my list of dishonest people not to read.

I liked this one. I'm not into the cheating, but not every one of these stories has to end with a BTB.

I thought the plot good and the storyline track commendable. But the writing was horrific. If translating from another language please get help. If english is your first language please request a refund of tour education

Good story with a great ending. Not necessarily one has to divorce or part away. If the other truly realizes his or her fault then there is no need to stretch the elasticity to a breaking point.