All Comments on 'Prenuptial Relations Ch. 01'

This was well written and hot

5 Stars. Excellent story, nicely written.

Loved it ! Can't wait for chapter two.

Definitely gonna need another part

A very engaging but also a hot story…I love that the wife is (of course..) thin, while Shelly has a more compact probably athletic body, hopefully with a sexy muscular ass. Anyway Shelly is clearly in charge and maybe she’ll decide on her own to do what is best for her and her brother..she should end his pathetic marriage…

Outstanding and overall flawless. Please write more soon.

Thank you!

E

Great story. Looking forward to more.

3way

Great story, so many possibilities. Can't wait for more!

Hot as usual. Your descriptions are solid gold.

Very hot 5 stars

Thank you all for your comments! Your positive feedback is a big part of what keeps me wanting to write more. :p As for this story, I have the next two chapters already written. But I need to finish editing them. (Remember, I self edit, so sometimes takes me a bit to get my stories not only written, but also ready for posting!) Hopefully I can get chapter two uploaded within a week or two!

Great story and as always very descriptive and wonderful to read!

LOVED it!

The description of having sex with his sister for the first time makes me believe the author may have actually had an incestuous encounter at one point. I tell you from actual experience the intensity hits you like nothing else. Your mind processes what is taking place and the sex is the most intense feeling you will ever experience. The first time with my sister was so animal, I came so hard the second her hand first touched me. The sex afterwards is indescribable. This author has done the best job so far relaying the feeling of an epic experiance. Either you’ve done it or you accidentally got it 100 percent right.

A level up from the rest! Loved the tantric and genuine caring in tandem with the action. So many places this story could go!

I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. As for the comment about you having firsthand experience, I have to agree, it does sound like your writing from experience.

As for self-editing, I personally think you are doing an admirable job.

Lust4Sure

not4longbyme@yahoo.com

Incredibly well written!

This is hot story

Remembered history and lingering desires.

Great. Sex descriptions with sister were way better than usual for this genre (except for the overuse of the word "tingle")...No vulgarity with the exception of "cunt". I prefer pussy...He was always overthinking about his sister . . . .

Fantastic story!! The flow on this story as well as the plot and character development are spot on.

Nice premise.

Needed more details. Needed more dialog during Shelly's handjob. Needed Shelly making him tell her she was sexier than Wendy.

Needed some oral action -- both by Shelly and to Shelly.

Four stars.