All Comments on 'Preparing Melissa Pt. 02'

Has been great so far, but somewhere along the line you lost the daughter, plus a little more detail about Melissa's first time would have been nice, did he go down on her, did she go down on him?

I'm enjoying the story & the memoir style, especially your awful first time - very poignant.

I'm having trouble with some of the ideas, like would you really suggest French Maid fantasies to a virgin? Maybe a step too far.

The language too... "Ejaculate into your love tunnel" sounds a mix of romance novel & clinical report. How does a mother really talk to a daughter's friend, especially after that earlier sexy encounter?

Mrs. J,

Thank you, from all of Mankind.