All Comments on 'Presents'

by MountainDewMan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
More, please

Very nice!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
It's called pissing.

".......as hot juice squirted from her. Spraying across her room to soak the carpet ....."

".......he felt a hot spray of fluid ......."

".........spraying her father with pure liquid pleasure."

Bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Just like my Daughter in Law.

We started pretty much the same way

airgodairgodalmost 6 years ago
Great

Please keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome at first

But not that pregnancy stuff again! Until the final sentence I wanted to give you 5 stars, now I won't do higher than 3.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Why the

HELL does anyone want to read about getting knocked up? Ruined a hot story. Rated a ONE because of that sentence. Pregnancy SCARES may not affect the score, but TRYING TO, WANTING TO or ACTUALLY GETTING knocked up is stupid.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518almost 6 years ago
Great story

Great twist on a common theme. I loved the unspoken communication between them and how the nanny cam uncovered their true desire. I too have spent most of my sex life trying NOT to get preggars, but while I don’t understand the desire to bear an incest baby, I would never pan a rating because of it. I rate a story on creativity, content, character development and style, so you got 5*s. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
That's how a woman should cum

Loved the daughter's reactions but the father's physical acts and emotional reactions were subpar. Still, an excellent read. Thank you!-

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Who doesn't love a mentally handicapped baby?

Who doesn't love mentally challenged babies? Most people is the correct answer. I tried to look beyond the errors and other such issues, but adding innocent babies to the incest story is the most pathetic thing ever. Have any of you whom are into that met a child born from such a union? It would open your eyes to how truly ridiculous such desires are because of the mental and physical development problems which have a statistically higher chance of happening than not. There is no problem until selfish morons wish to curse a child for sexual gratification. I suspect most of the people enjoying babies born from incest are products of such couplings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great job

Love the pregnant part

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hot hot hot

Absolutely loved the tongue fucking bit and the squirting cunt juice, I adore cunt especially squiting cunts, I crave cunt nectar, getting drunk on it and the more I get the more I want. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

ansdguyansdguyalmost 6 years ago
To anon...

It takesmany gereations for genetic defecs to arise from incestuous breeding. The ancient societies used it for hundreds of years in order to maintain royal bloods lines. The odds of having an issue withing one generation is nearly impossible. The actual percentage of birth defects from incest is barely above a non incetuous delivery. The English, Irish, Greeks and many other societies used incest for many hundreds of years. King Tut, it is speculated was quite hobbled due to inbreadings. If you watched Gladiator, you might recall that the King had sexual relations with his sister in order to produce an heir to his thrown. (His sister was in love with the glasiator) Then there's the Game of Throwns plot with incest. So, get a fucking clue. Ignorance is no excuse for saying stupid

shit.

PS: What an erotic tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fuck me too Daddy

This story made me dripping wet. Now I want to be fucked like this screaming daddy as he turns me in to his own personal cum dumpster.

dirtyricekingdirtyricekingalmost 5 years ago
I LIKE pregnancy stories

Don't listen to the naysayers! Incestuous pregnancy stories are erotic (to me anyway)

imurddyimurddyover 4 years ago
It's not called pissing

It's a real phenomenon,one that I've induced in my girlfriends. You really should know what you are talking about before you comment,anonymous!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love your stories but please proofread. Letters missing often he should be her and he should be she at least 6 or more times and not just in this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So very hot until the chill of having a baby. Not cool. Not sexy. A total downer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Meh

Bill S.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

To the Anon. moron who asked, "... Have any of you whom are into that met a child born from such a union?"

Yep. I have a client (I am a general contractor) who freely admits she is the offspring of incestuous rape and is a highly intelligent individual with ZERO mental or physical issues.

And as another person stated, virtually all of the European royal bloodlines involved incest for hundreds of years to maintain "purity". Their 'family trees' look more like sticks... lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sexy, hot....until the pregnancy part. I don't get the draw to that...to each your own. Downer for me too.

Marklynda2Marklynda28 months ago

As I always say 'daddy/daughter love is the best!'

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great, but don’t need the whole “breeding” thing. Not hot.

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