All Comments on 'Pressing Matters with Sister Pt. 02 - Fall Break'

Juß dont have us wait ao long my dude

This is great. The pressing was an unusual choice but you’re really making it work. Love the pacing, and hot, funny sexy times. 5/5. Can’t wait for the next episode

Love it!!

Your slow pace almost makes these not worth it.

Loving this seekes

Don't listen to the naysayers you're one of the best and most consistent writers on this site in this genre. Love the slow escalation.

MORE PLEASE!!! Really enjoyed the story

love the pace... fuck these guys. If a 4 pages stories is too long for you don't read it and go on pornhub.

love the "mutual masturbation/dry humping" theme going on.

Cannot wait for" things escalate even further". Fantastic story!

Out of the frying pan... Love the melons/lemons device. Switch two letters, get to different – but equally juicy – sisters. And Jan makes 5 participants, 5 stars of the story.

Don't keep us waiting for chapter 3.

Can't wait to see how Lindsay gets her way & gets fucked and I'm curious how you'll suck Jan into rhe group

Great 5 star chapter. Keep up the good work especially now that all four siblings are likely to be involved. Can hard ly-pun intended. Wait but for goodness sakes buy that kid a few boxes of condoms since no one can afford the pill !!

5 stars.

I cant wait for part 3

I enjoyed it a lot but the story was a bit choppy in the sentences but maybe a few more words in the sentences would have been a good thing. As I had it read aloud from my pc it came out choppy. But it was very good and believable.

Can't wait for part 3! I'd love to see them tempting fate with the pregnancy stuff.

fun quirky story, the only thing I didn't like was Kara's involvement, I hope this is the last time she is involved.

Same Kara was not needed

Fuck em all on part 3!!

This reminds me of some of the very BEST TV/streaming shows that stop JUST at the point where the reader (viewer) is leaning forward ready for the next paragraph; the next sentence, then, BAM!! "Join us NEXT week, folks, for the next chapter!"

I'm standing by...!!

X-Man

I love your writing. The background stuff is great. I feel for the family

When is part 3 coming?

Kinda fun, not a fan of Kara or Lindsay's inclusion.

This is so hot I desperately need part 3

I want to add another star for Lindsey being vegan, but I guess 5 stars is all the site has.

Really not a fan of Kara's inclusion. Lindsay was already stretching it.

Is there a #3?

I think part 3 of this story is much more worthy than another poly story. Sorry, but i'm a sucker for incest, like most of us here anyway

I love the realistic way in which they fear the consequences of unprotected sex, and yet, while they relent, they also tremble at the edge of the precipice. I think many of us have experienced something like this, and that part makes the story believable. Threesomes, orgies, and the like, while cool to read, are not relatable. I like this story a lot my friend! Thanks!

PLEASE promise that #3 will arrive!

The author knits a strong thread in chapter one, than it sort of frazzles into weaker fibers, well, that's how I feel about it. In other words, I share Futileaccount's opinion

WILDLY looking forward to the next chapter!

Note: Would have have waited before I brought in Jan myself. But, I'm still curious to see what happens next, maybe some risky cumshots. And maybe even preg risk creampies, where the girls want it in them even with the risk.

WAITING FOR CHAPTER 3!!!!!!!!

Please do more.

Hot story! Can’t wait for part 3!

Hot stuff. Do more like this.

Another one

I think that officially this story has been neglected. Sorry, though, because it was lovely.

Moaaar!!!

Hotter than hell! 5 stars +

Bill S.

Would absolutely love a Part 3.

waiting for part 3 desperately

Please waiting for part 3

Part 3 please!!

I really want to see part 3, but you can't force creative inspiration.

Very, very interesting. A sequel would have been nice but me as a reader is in no position to plead or beg for a third installment to this story. Wine is ready when it's ready, so also goes that way for authors to put their stories together. Thanks to the author great job.

5 stars!!! Can hardly wait for the next part.

I'll be bummed until next chapter

Very well written, waiting for part 3 !

Oooohhhh....mmmyyy!!!!!! And I, as others, cannot help but wait in anticipation of Part 3...this ending was TOO 😋 DELICIOUS!!

Jan...Jan...Yummy!!!! She is gonna fall, right into the whole scene...she works, so has protection in place...I see escalation on a big level on the horizon!

Five Big Stars...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💥💥💥💥💥

Honestly, Lindsay’s enthusiasm and openness is the best part of this story. Hoping that there will be more parts to come, and that it escalates to all the siblings having sex with each other.

This is totally stupid.......... particularly for this age of individuals........... maybe 14 / 15 year olds....... but seriously just plain weird.

This is the sexiest story that I have laughed out loud while reading... well done.

I hope you remember to take care of, or account for, emotions in this; Lucy and our hero seem less connected...

Very secksy action, with serious constraints....

Five for you

Man this story really escalated quickly... but in a good way. I really like it, can't wait to see the next part. You've got gold here my friend!

Made me laugh so hard I might've pissed myself a little

The story, other than that one moment in Ch 1 with Lucy where they finally fucked, felt like one eternal tease that didn't really go anywhere. Unless it picks up and they all start actually fucking (maybe with Jan as well), best to leave this one alone.

Great stories hope you make more would love to see what happens next one of my favorite stories I have come across thank you for that

Great writing, ✍️, I hope you can come up with enough time to write the next chapter. You have a great story going.