All Comments on 'Pretender's Fate Ch. 07'

While I can see the appeal of making the ending a bit open handed, I kinda wish there was a more significant finale.

I really enjoy your stories, the research that you do to make the stories contain details that make them seem accurate is part of the enjoyment, in this one the amount of pseudo-historical information adds to the reality, and your erotic writing is exceptional, subtle but erotic sat the same time. Well done, I always read your stories and am very rarely disappointed or left other than hard :)