All Comments on 'Pretending Ch. 01'

Love this story. Excellent writing. Reader can feel the emotions of the characters. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

beautiful story, well written. nice rhythm and pace, good descriptions.

This was really great powerful stuff! Granted they're both idiots *smiles* but so far it suits the storyline so I'm all for it! Can't wait to see what's next.

Great writing, great story. Shes is the master of storytelling...theres no one better:)

Perfect.

I loved this story, it drew me into it and took me on a powerful emotional journey from tragic insecurity to the realization of the love that was almost denied. You have conjured up charactors that are full bodied with real pain and real hopes. Magnificent work!

Definitely at least a ten in my books. My heart was pounding the entire time. Such wonderful characters and such a sweet, lovely relationship you've created. Well done, PennLady. Well done!

Now, I'm off to chapter two!

BEAUTIFULLY WELL WRITTEN STORY!!!!

Loved the hesitant concern Connie has about her appearance: as someone who has a scarred leg I can empathise completely with her. You are a very fine writer PennLady. Thank you.

As a person who has my own scars, I can relate to the anxiety of having to explain them when asked. The Ron guy at the beginning was an incredibly insensitive jerk for bringing up her leg while she was potentially in earshot, yeesh. But Simon seems so perfect and understanding, it's driving me crazy that neither can just confess their true feelings and let loose. I really like the tender moments between these two, even though it's laden with doubt and hesitation, clearly there's potential for some genuine romance. Well done!

excellent

What a fabulous start to a story...... How many friends feel like this but never follow through