All Comments on 'Pretty Lin Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great story.

Very good story. I enjoy reading this chapter as well as the other 3. Please write more chapters soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Next chapter.

I can't wait to read what happens next. Please post a new chapter soon.

TheAbsurd_studentTheAbsurd_studentabout 13 years ago
I love the story

of Lin and Micca. Please continue them. This is gold!

tygztygzover 10 years ago

Exceptional series. Both characters are likeable, they're both described in general terms - thankfully no measurements are given! - and the interplay as their relationship evolves is well thought out.

I especially like how the nascent D&S aspect unfolds - nice and subtle, happening because of the two players' temperaments and all for direct pleasure (personally I don't care much for S&M).

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
a fair exchange

Yes, Lin, this is yours

Yes, Micca, this is yours

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Been busy lately, but will try to post some new ones. Thanks again for your constructive comments! ------------------------------------ I've written a fair bit of non-fiction before, but these are my first tries at fiction. So far, I'm having a blast with it! Thanks t...

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