All Comments on 'Pretty Lin'

The most beautiful description of a first orgasm. Thanks!

this lovely description of an awakening could easily have been in romance, first time, and erotic encounter,

Absolutely lovely. I would be surprised if this was not written from experience. So very, lovingly real.

I'm not sure how I missed this story, but it is pretty good so far. Thanks for sharing it with us!

If it hadn't been for hiddenintheopen's comment I would have never seen this story, but I'm so glad I did! I went on to read the other parts and it's simply amazing. The characters, their chemistry and affection, the very subtle and loving D/s feel to it, all the new things they try together (not gonna spoil it, but pt4 was quite a turn on) just all of it, well done! I'd really love a part 5 but considering this was added back in 08/09 (10 years ago!?!) I won't hold my breath. Thank you to both humminbean and hiddenintheopen.

So beautiful, I am amazed that a straight man could write so well about a woman's sexual awakening with another woman.

Good premise.

Lacks tension.

Three stars,