All Comments on 'Pretty Please'

You don't spring incest swapping nudist on your fiance the first time they meet the family.

If any of this is real I want to visit the family. Wowser.

When's the follow up coming?

@Jonboy12345678910 - I'm not sure, I'm in the middle of my first LW story right now. But it IS coming.

Only in Literotica would a young lady introduce her fiance to her mother, and father who are nudist, swapping, oversexed, fornicaters. Who's father also took her virginity. Holy hell, talk about blowing the young mans mind. Crazy well written story.

Normally, I would be turned off by the father/daughter incest. But there's something about the way that you presented it here that made it palatable. I really wanted you to be explicit with Tim and Coral's hook-up. I liked it when Tim caressed her baby bump, but more emphasis could have easily been placed on the fact that Coral was impregnated by AJ and couldn't wait to have Tim cum inside of her. That would have been very hot.

I chuckled when you used something that I put into my story "That Girl Next Door". After the brother and sister were caught in bed together one morning by their mother, she starts to explain to them why she didn't explode over their incest. Quoting from your story:

"The time has come, the walrus said, to speak of many things," she whispered."

I first learned about that poem from the John Wayne movie DONOVAN'S REEF. I had seen the movie often as a kid but I was probably in third grade before I actually went digging for it. The ending always made me laugh in spite of the fact that it's some extremely dark humor. 3/5

This is hot.

Thank you for writing.

Very sexy. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Unusual premise.

Interesting buildup.

But the sex, while there's certainly no lack of it, is all rushed.

Lacks extended foreplay. And lacks teasing/edging.

Simply, from my perspective, listing sexual activities rather than describing them in detail.

And no ass play?

Three stars.

So interesting and excellent writing. Love the location and the family involved. But why on earth with all the sex is there no anal or butt play of any kind, lacking anal is a big mistake for these folks , would have. Even interesting

A totally outlandish a d incredibly erotic tale. Well done!

Nice story, however I usually don't do nudism as the lynch pin for any story, but in this case OK...Liked the lack of vulgarity...The Romanian words got to be kind of a speed bump to smooth reading...Thankfully you used the correct word "supine" where appropriate rather than "prone"...Now, with the introduction of Adriana, Trish, Coral and AJ there tended to become too many protagonists in a story with out a DP . . . .