by SacredHarlot
Beautiful writing! I swear you're one of the best (if not the best) erotic writers on here
There's some clunky writing in the intro - nothing major, but a few places where axing a few words would make the sentences read more clearly. The sex is written gorgeously though. Great read.
I definitely expect to see more chapters to this story. It was quite well written, the length of the story itself was pleasant....and the story itself was quite intoxicating.
Please continue!!