All Comments on 'Price of Acceptance'

Needs a little work on phrasing and punctuation.

This is a joke, right?

Be careful what you wish for

would love to see where this goes! it felt like a set up for a greater tale to be told.

This was an entry into the 750 Word Challenge. The story was written fairly quickly, short, and to the point while hopefully being entertaining on purpose.

Thanks for reading!

Awesome! Is what I would like to say but it felt a bit too short. Somehow I want to know what will those two do now that they became twisted incestous demons. Have fun with each other? Assault some humans? Or just carry on as usual pretending to be human... Still 5/5 for me!

Awesome! Is what I would like to say but it felt a bit too short. Somehow I want to know what will those two do now that they became twisted incestous demons. Have fun with each other? Assault some humans? Or just carry on as usual pretending to be human... Still 5/5 for me!

Ooh creepy and still sexy

I really enjoyed that. Well written. Thank you.

Needs some backstory as, the into was kind of jarring.