All Comments on 'Price of Past Miracles Ch. 01'

by surober1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Long and drawn out shit!

Are you trying to see how many words you can put into a story and bore the hell out of the readers? Tell the kids that they are brother and sister and let them make their own decision about where they want their lives to go.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Interesting?

OK -- I know DNA is not available at the time of this story and from the description in the other story with the twins being so different (aside from male/female) that just maybe Charles did father one of the twins. Now -- I'm not sure what gives. Was that the intention or just a coincidnce? I am enjoying the story but it was alittle drawn out there. LG

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