All Comments on 'Price of Revenge'

Would have been better if you would have finished it such describing the reaction of the dad after he finds what events he set in motion with his prank but you decided to leave us hanging with that no I don't like it not finishing a story and leaving us hanging this way is a definite no and will always result in the worst possible rating anyone who likes to actually read stories would give all the other comments saying it's good only read it to jack off too sex in it I won't stop reading your stories yet but I come across another story you left unfinished I will

LOVED IT!!!

Hawt und Zexxi!

11/10 Foot Jobs!!!!!

you can't go ass to pussy and back you're gonna give this fictional lady a yeast infection

Amazing story, makes me want my mother

To be finished properly, like him finding out that they know it's back fired on him

Hilarious. Hot. What a great story. Thanks for sharing

Loved it. 5 🌟. Well written, with a nice touch of gentle dominance.

Sean.

Good one! 5/5

Need to add more showing how his prank fucked him and lost her

This is a fun story, but it could use a second chapter to round it out.

Great suspense and buildup. I agree with others: part 2, please.

A little anti-climactic in comparison to the previous intensity. Wanted to hear daddy's reaction. Perhaps even have her tell him she's done with him. Good story nonetheless.

You cut the story short which hurt the rating as seems left unfinished I get it is a fantasy story but you apparently have the same problem as a lot of other writers on here you don't know how to finish a story that could have been good with the proper ending instead it's just average and with you leaving it unfinished this way is good normally I would rate a 1 or a 2 for stories left unfinished

You should have shown how his prank cost him his wife and how he feels finding out that not only did he lose his marriage but how he feels to find out he lost his wife to his son

Loved it, please keep writing.

Very vivid imagination in the bedroom, from a female… 23 - 26? Per the bio if it’s NOT stretched (no pun intended). Like some of the itgers, too mild of an ending. But still ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ just for the continuation of the pussy to ass to pussy, then to mouth???? Whole lotta shit going on. Again, no pun intended, but a vaginal infection is a sure fire result for that rapid fire

Well this was deliciously delightful. Although I have to say the feet fetish stuff in some of your stories is a bit much. I'm guessing it's a thing you're in to. It just doesn't gel for me; feels out of place, to me at least.

The ending was a little but underwhelming. I thought there was going to be some explosive outburst at least. What a shame. Was kind of expecting him to walk in on them and find them for real having slept together. And then they say "April Fools" or some shit, and leave him wondering.

Innovative plot.

Excellent couldn't stop reading

Loved it, again.

Deliciously fun experience 5⭐️'s

OMG! So fucking hot!

Great story. Ending a bit abrupt though.

Would have liked to see hubby’s reaction

when she told him he’d fucked up.

Where is the rest? So much more could have been added. It feels incomplete :( It was a great story though. Very hot.