by edrider73
You're a writer who just puts it out there without mincing around. Great job....
Oral sex (either way) has always been tied to food and oral gratification--"eating", "sucking", "swallowing", etc.
I've read other tales where one of the parties placed something "truly" edible on the other to either mask the taste or simply entice their partner--but yours is the first I've encountered that had such enjoyable repartee between lovers. Congrats and kudos on your imagination and writing ability. Two thumbs up! More please.