All Comments on 'Primal Fishing'

I found some feedback for this story in my email this morning. Which is fantastic, I love feedback. But this person told me that Lisa getting it on with all the guys didn't wash and that the main character, Jamie, was too selfish. Said Lisa ought to be able to have fun.

MAde me realize that just because I know the Lisa/Jamie stories are a seried doesn't mean everyone else does. So, in a previous story, called "the Rugby Team" (original), Lisa does fuck the guys from this story. It's a fantasy Jamie fulfills for her. Maybe I'll post the story soon.

Anyway, thanks for your feedback! I love it.

emerald

That is why I love to fish and camp. I had an experience like this, except my girlfriend and three other women were there. We were all bi for the weekend. I look forward to you next story.